Monday, January 12, 2009

Lacks Umph But In The Right Direction

---------- Forwarded message ----------
From: ***********
Date: Sun, Dec 7, 2008 at 10:02 AM
Subject: Re: Poetry Submission: ***********
To: *********


Dear *********,
After reviewing your submissions we've decided to pass. While we did like your poems, they lacked the umph we were looking for. It's hard to describe exactly what we didn't like about them. We do feel like you're going in the right direction, though.

We appreciate your submission and hope you will submit to us again. If you have a moment, please record our response times here: ***************

Thanks,
***** and ******, Editors

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